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maybe life's passing me by
maybe it's parading by my window
maybe it's full of love
and laughs and joy
maybe i'm too blind to see it

maybe i'm sitting here
waiting for life to begin
and it's already almost over

maybe while i try to fly
my wings rot and fall away
leaving ugly scars of what might have been

maybe while i wait for love
she's come and gone
and found someone more alert
more appreciative of her beauty

maybe while i long for freedom
the key got sick of waiting for me
maybe it offered itself to another
maybe one more worthy

maybe while i write this poem
my life's getting sick of waiting
maybe it'll soon give up on me
like so many others
maybe it'll walk away
maybe it'll leave me sitting here
an empty shell
alone
what might have been

just maybe
©2006-2009 ~CravingSleep
:iconcravingsleep:

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Fumbling his confidence
And wond'ring why the world has passed him by
Hoping that he's meant for more than arguments
And failed attempts to fly

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Dreaming about Providence
And whether mice or men have second tries
Maybe we've been living with our eyes half open
Maybe we're bent and broken

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my favourite bit in this is the fly bit. hope you like it.

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:icondionysis:
Indeed, sigh.. What might have been....

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"Life's journey is not to arrive at the grave safely in a well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, totally worn out, shouting "...holy shit...what a ride!"
:iconplaceinthedirt:
awww this is so sad... but so amazing.

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:iconsammitysams:
i don't know what to say about it... i loved how you made it seem as if life could be waiting for you.... that was what hit me the most.

Sorry I'm not giving much of a comment, I'm sooo tired, and i'll come back and comment again =P but i definitely have to give it a :+fav:

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The Sammity
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"Ouch... Balsamic Vinegar in my sty..."
:iconcravingsleep:
:) thanks for understanding =p

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hugs and love :heart:
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no more tears, no more fears

...don't look back
:iconcravingsleep:
thankyou very much :) :hug:

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hugs and love :heart:
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no more tears, no more fears

...don't look back
:iconcravingsleep:
thanks so much sammi! i understand. i didnt expect anyone to have read between 1 am when i submited it and now anyway =p

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hugs and love :heart:
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no more tears, no more fears

...don't look back
:iconaphillios:
Its brilliant Em :)

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I am me. Nothing More, Nothing Less. I am who I am, nothing before what you've seen can prepare you.
:iconcravingsleep:
thankyou :love:

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hugs and love :heart:
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no more tears, no more fears

...don't look back

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